I feel like, at the moment, it doesn't feel immediately apparent that we're witnessing the boys' imaginations as opposed to something that exists in their world, and I'm not sure whether this is something that helps or hinders the animation - what do you think?
Alex suggested that I could include some dialogue at the beginning of the animation in which the younger brother says that he wants to play a game, which can then lead into the current script. Do you think this would be an improvement? Or is there anything else you suggest?
