From Script to Screen | Step Outline (Redo)
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Camera shows an advertisement for a play, hammered into a
wall, which only portrays the leading woman with a jewelled necklace on
Cuts to ECU of the necklace in front of a photograph featuring
an old woman wearing it, then a hand picks it up
CU of actress putting on the necklace, then a knock at the
door
Cuts to CU of understudy performing on-stage with actress’
necklace on
CU side-on of detective looking down at the flyer showing
the actress wearing her necklace. ECU side-on of the detective looking back up
at the stage quizzically
Detective stands and walks away
Cuts to detective walking backstage, past the lead actress’s
door and entering the understudy’s dressing room. Just after entering, applause
can be heard so detective walks out
CU of detective leaving the room and walking down the hallway;
understudy can faintly be seen hiding in the shadows behind him
Cuts to a long hallway with an old door at the end (looks as
though it is never used) and detective peaks his head round a corner, looking either
side down the hallway then noticing the door. Detective quickly walks out and
towards the door
As he walks down the hallway, a silhouette briskly moves in
front of the camera
Detective notices padlock on the door for a moment and steps
back, kicking a loose nail
Detective looks down and sees the nail beside a floorboard
which is slightly pulled up
ECU as detective moves the floorboard and picks up a key
Pure-black shot from inside of the room as a click can be
heard and the door creaks open, revealing the actress dead on the floor with
her head caved in (detective is silhouetted in the doorway)
ECU of detectives face as he begins to turn at the sound of
running footsteps behind him
Cut to black
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