Much better with the quotes, Michael :)

Just a quick pointer - after the quote, you only need the surname and the year in brackets, so (Ebert, 1998) for example. You also need to have another look at how you reference the inmages (which need to also be labelled 'Figure 1' etc.)

PS... and make sure you proof read - you have Lang with 'an immense budge for this film' :)